Trailer - First draft

After a lot of time, work, and fun, the first draft for the 'Forgive Me My Henchmen' trailer is out. Here it is:

This is not the final product, just a work in progress. Because I have been looking for ways to improve it, I posted the video on a reddit forum and asked for feedback.

The people who got back to me are rockstars! They gave some really good feedback which I know will improve the trailer.

To summarize, there are two main things I will do based on the feedback I received:

1) I will reduce the trailer length! Right now, the trailer is about 1:40 in length. I want to reduce that anywhere from 20 to 40 seconds (the more, the better).
2) I will make how to play/objectives more clear! Most people, after watching the trailer, were still unclear about how to play this game and what decisions they'd be making. I need to make this crystal!

So right now, at this moment, I am drinking tea and thinking...thinking about how I want to drink more tea.

Wish me luck!

Blake

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